Old Poem, I asked AI to critique it. AI thinks I was a genius back in the day.
-- I,
scary puppy,
fading ugly,
burnt sorry,
bord evil,
Silent soul,
raging tears,
dirty poem,
buried fears.
I
faked a life,
found no love,
scorched all peace,
stole my hopes,
made no home,
lost no sorrow.
I
sugar lipped satan,
blinded desert snake,
red blooded maggot,
faithful old poison,
the sorry plague.
I
dancing in the demon's night,
Sleeping on a cross of nails,
bathing ina sea of screams,
dining in a soulless grave,
living in the vultures eye.
I
Unsung,
Untold,
Unleased,
Unborn.
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